In all, I like this, and I think you did a great job . . . but I have to say I'm a little bothered by the fact that he seems so soft and innocent for something as hardcore as a Metal Gear. I'd also expect something more aquatic than airborne, considering its nature and the origins of its name. Of course, that might just be my point of view. That having been said, congrats on the DD! I loved the games, and I'm glad to see something as creative as a Metal Gear humanization get a DD. I've never seen one before, and I think you pulled it off well.